December Nights

I guess it was okay. But I don't like reading such advanced grammar all the time. It would have been less of a bother if it was consistant. You just ...

Me likey! It didn't have the deep emotion lyrics that could confuse some people, it had some easily recognisable analogies. I could feel myself sticking my tounge out at the ...

The reason why I was attracted to click on this poem is because I have been trying to write one called "blue eyes". And to be honest, based on what ...

That was a great idea. It could be lyrically a little better I have to agree with who said it could be better. But it was a good draft of ...

I think that the beginning two lines should be merged. The 'I know" is a little to repetitive. I know that honors English poems can be a little daft though ...

In the beginning the poem seems empty. And kind of unneeded like you could take off some of it. And the idea of two people being fire and water is ...

That is such a cool poem. It totally reflects the warrior princess thing. It is great. But one thing is that it goes down really long. So you might want ...

This piece is very long, and very good. There are so many words that tell me a story in a way. The fact is though, maybe I'm just like drawing ...

thats a really good personification or whatever its called of a tree. i get bored in math all the time too, as if i actually ever pay attention. my B ...

That is how i feel sometimes. The poem doesn't really strike me to have a sceme though so i dont relly foloow that. but i can understand how the poem ...